The worst first sentences to novels that must never be written.

Thursday, July 1, 2010

Week 1 Cont... The Buddy Pic

The snow-peaked Himalayan mountains dazzle in the morning light as the flawless white flakes are trampled by the clumsy footsteps of young Chasey McDougel and her wise Sherpa friend Dalma; unaware that they are being pursued by Chinese agents dedicated to undermining the McDougel family's attempts to unite the Sherpa tribes.

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